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Nowadays, lots of household waste is a problem. What is the cause of this problem and how can we solve the issue?

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In recent times, a lot of domestic
waste
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 is causing a problem The amount of rubbish is increasing because of several reasons.
This
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 essay will deal with the causes of the increasing amount of
waste
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 and how it affects the
environment
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 and suggests some ways to overcome it. The most serious impact of
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 situation is on the
environment
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.
people
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 regularly shop for various kinds of goods which are not environmentally friendly,
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 disposed of in the landfill and causes water and soil pollution. Mixing food
waste
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 and kitchen scrap with non-organic
waste
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 can cause gases that are harmful to the
environment
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.
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 destroying used plastic is becoming a major problem everywhere. these things are difficult to destroy. The
first
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 reason is
people
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 these days are given many choices in life that encourage them to buy new things.
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, everyone is not consciously aware of the
waste
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 generated from their homes. The
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 reason is that many food manufacturers use heavy packaging for the goods. Currently, cooperation from several parties is needed to overcome the bad effects of
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waste
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people
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 need to learn to be responsible for sorting their
waste
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.
People
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 should buy what is necessary. as far as possible excessive packaging should be avoided.
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, The government should encourage some industries to use an alternative way to package their products. In conclusion, public awareness in choosing, buying and managing
waste
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 is the key to protecting the
environment
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.
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, regulations and supervision from the government regarding the packaging of goods are
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 important to overcome the environmental problem.
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