Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with a friend. He/She has just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank him/her for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Anne, I’m writing to let you know that I’ve received the photos you have sent me. Thank you very much for sending me the photos we took and allowing me to stay with you in your home in Paris. I had a wonderful time and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I’m still amazed at the cathedrals we saw and the beauty of the Seine River. I couldn’t write to you before because I changed my jobs as I mentioned to you after coming back. I’m now working at the University of Kelaniya as a lecturer. I was not happy with my previous job as it was monotonous. Now I teach undergraduate students and supervise their final year projects, which I find interesting. Please come and stay with me when you travel to Sri Lanka

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year. You will be able to enjoy the beach since my home is located in a seaside village. We can

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visit hill country, where you can enjoy tea plantations and have a cup of freshly brewed tea from a local tea factory. All the best,

Anuradhi

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Anuradha

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