In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In modern society, there is a wide range of advertisements. Today, businesses usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
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trend is due to high demand from the public and Linking Words
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is a negative development.
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aspect to point out is that people follow the latest tendency which puts so much pressure on the business industry. Linking Words
For example
, there are many different types of smartphones and each model has unique functions. Linking Words
Although
some use only particular functions on their phones, they still chase the newest ones in order to follow the trend in the community. Linking Words
As a result
, many companies need to advertise the sales points of their products in order to make profits.
As far as I am concerned, Linking Words
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trend has a negative development. The Linking Words
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example is that there is high competition among companies. Small businesses would be affected by the competition and they would need to close their businesses. Linking Words
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would have a negative impact on the employees. Linking Words
Secondly
, the public would not appreciate the items that they have already had as their belongings. If they replaced their belongings as the new products are released, the previous ones would be thrown away even though they have not worn out. Linking Words
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would have another negative influence on the environment. There would be so much waste that nature would be destroyed.
To conclude, the pressure from the public plays a key role when it comes to advertisements. Linking Words
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is a negative development in modern society with regards to people's attitudes and environmental issues.Linking Words
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