Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The development of a country has always been an important concern to authorities.
Although
a lot of governments take the economical situation as their most crucial goal, there are people who believe that there are far more aspects that should be considered as serious as that, excluding me.
A country financial condition plays a key role in its position in the political world. Linking Words
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, affects different aspects of a nation Linking Words
such
as the peace and safety of society. The rate of crimes like burglary would increase if people did not have adequate income, Linking Words
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In other words
, economic problems would not only influence the people lifestyle but Linking Words
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deteriorate morality. Linking Words
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, I believe, the government should take action to make economic progress in the Linking Words
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has an impact on other features Linking Words
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as education and well-being.
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However
, there is a population that expects the authorities to bear other types of progress in mind as well. Proper education is probably one of the essential issues that should be regarded simultaneously with the economy which would result in technological development. Japan, for influence, would not become Linking Words
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powerful if the government did not support researchers and engineers, especially the auto industry. The Linking Words
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feature would be the healthiest which is as serious as financial. Poor health conditions may increase the risk of decimation in all ages especially children and young adults who are valuable as workforces as well. Epidemics and pandemics Linking Words
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as covid-19 possibly result in a holocaust if a nation is in a bad health condition. Linking Words
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outlook supports other progress to be taken as critical as the economy.
To conclude, there is an argument if growth in the financial status of a country is the most important responsibility of a government or there are other features as well. Anyhow, I think, money plays a key role even in other issues Linking Words
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as social well-being.Linking Words
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