A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, telling them about these things. In your email, As Say what these things are Say why they are interesting/enjoyable Suggest what you can do together

Dear Leonard, I am so excited to hear that you are going to come to Calgary

week. It’s been months

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have seen seen each other. What a great time we will have together!

This

town is full of amazing things. While there are many things to explore, the community I live in is literally a delight! There are soccer clubs where we can flex, rock bands where we can roll, and amusement parks where we can laugh a lot. There is a rock band “Zebra” which you will particularly love. Oh boy! You can’t be there without being elated. But apart from these, if you want a peaceful time, there is fishing on weekends where the neighbourhood chit chats as they sit near the riverside. The people here have a great sense of humour. You’re going to love all these things once you land here. So brace yourself for amazing weekends and crazy sunsets. I can’t wait to hear from you Your friend, Adil

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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