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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The given three pie charts describe the information about the
world
's spending, consumption of resources and
population
; units are measured in percentages. Overall, Asia continent has more than half populace while USA & Europe have the majority of
world
's consumption of resources. According to the
,
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world
 spending pie graph illustrates others have two fifths per cent while clothing is a tiny fraction;
second
-largest spending is food, which is just below one quarter, remaining transport and housing is less than a fifth. From the
world
population
 graph, Asia has the majority of the
population
 among the other continent, America, Europe has the same amount of
population
, which is 14 per cent while Africa and other has 10 and 5 per cent respectively. The USA and Europe have
three fifths
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 of consumption of resources,
in contrast
, other countries have only two fifths.
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