Some people claim that many things that children are taught at school have wasted their time. Other people argue that everything children study at school is useful at some time. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

School
curriculum and
activities
at
school
always remains a question of debate among forums,while some people are satisfied with all the subjects covered at
school
.
On the other hand
, few are thinking that number of things taught at
school
wasting their time.The
next
paragraphs will discuss both sides in detail but,
personally
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I think the more covered at
school
is better as those things will be used at some point later in life.
Firstly
,schools try to cover a wide range of
activities
and subjects for
students
divided into different grades from 1 to 7, considering maturity level and brain development of
students
at that age level.
Secondly
,
this
syllabus is being decided by considering field expert opinions and feedback from parents and the general public.
Therefore
school
curriculum got a good foundation for including or excluding one or another subject or skills in that format.
Furthermore
, schools want all directional development of their
students
so the more they teach the better for the pupils.
Although
schools try to accommodate more
students
,some consider it unnecessary and waste time and funds, for those so-called extra
activities
but the
school
board and governments give them a chance to review and vote,before introducing new material.
Additionally
,physical
activities
, art classes,music classes and all extra-curricular
activities
give teachers chance to find out hidden talent from some
students
and those
students
can be given better opportunities to grow that talent to the fullest.I still remember the words of one of the great professors that 'I am giving a lecture to 200
students
for science ,and if one will be a scientist
then
I am happy. In conclusion
school
syllabus is universal ,considering all hidden gems among
students
who teachers will be looking for ,so I think the wide range of curricula and skills to include is justified.
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