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In many countries, very few young people read newspaper or follow the news on TV. what do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Following the
news
 and reading newspaper is not as common in young
generation
 as in elderly population across the globe and for
such
 development,reasons may be different priorities,interest and demand of
time
 for youth.
Therefore
 solutions can be opted considering the causes of less popularity of those things in young adults from providing free newspapers to running
news
 channels in lunchrooms during break hours.The
next
 paragraphs will flash more light on the issue and probable remedies.
Firstly
,Youngblood is more interested in sports,dramas and celebrities as they want to know about the latest trends in fashion,technologies and games.
Additionally
,In their meeting with friends and ,peers those topics are on the table with updating each others knowledge and personal experience about new gadgets.
Furthermore
, exploring social sites like Facebook,Twitter,Instagram and what's app is a most favourite activity of today's young
generation
.Their focus is on,carrier and future development so ,
time
 will be allotted to job and skill development,
in other words
, no free
time
 left. So, the solution I will start by pushing the
news
 and related activities on social websites, online free access to newspaper and
news
 channels with free internet for eligible candidates,who will get benefit from it.
Additionally
, we can ask the young
generation
 the way they want the
news
 so the media can accommodate their choices in broadcasting the
news
 material.
Although
 we can serve them with
news
 material rather admire or not will be their own decision. In,conclusion the above-mentioned problems and solutions are what I can suggest at
this
 point in
time
 but we can keep our mind open for suggestions from different groups and forums to help divert the young
generation
 in the following
news
 on tv and reading newspapers.
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