1. More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides and oceans. What problems does it cause? And what measures can be taken.

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Towns, rural areas and seas are getting polluted by soaring
trashes
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of
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plastic
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. The objective of
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composition is to shed light
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of the issues involved with
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waste along with a few cogent measures. The problems associated with
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undecomposable plastics are
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.
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with, it contaminates the
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and
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pollution. For illustration, Microplastic,
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plastic
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in its lowest physical form, dilute not just with
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but
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plastic
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is of
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family, it is a toxic material.
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up with the
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, it results in
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pollution. Ultimately because of
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toxic
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, people are suffering from multitudes of diseases
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etc.
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, the
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plastic
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gets mixed up with the
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and it remains undecomposed in it for hundreds of years.
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, because of the toxic nature of the
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, it makes the
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poisonous.
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, it not even just degrades the quality of
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agriculture but
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contaminates the water underneath the
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. Several measures
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been proposed by
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scientist to counter the pollution arising from
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dumped
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. Awareness programmes
to
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be conducted among the masses and familiarized them with the dangers of using it.
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to that, the government should either stop the companies
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excessively
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the
plastic
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or
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this companies
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shall be guided under strict laws, to follow the rules and regulations in producing only the
plastic
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in its biodegradable form.
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, responsible authorities
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through out
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the world should
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an efficient strategy for
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and treatment of
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discarded
plastic
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. It is apparent from the above arguments that the danger rising
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form
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the
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plastics are tremendous.
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above proposed
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actions, its dangers can be
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to a large magnitude.
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