Nowadays, many
people
chose to work in other cities or Use synonyms
countries
very far away from their families. Personally, the advantages are making Use synonyms
people
be Use synonyms
independent
person and learning distinct Add an article
an independent
countries
’ cultural. The disadvantages are Use synonyms
people
become lonely or influence family’s Use synonyms
relationship
.
Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
Firstly
, working far away from the family can Linking Words
helps
Change the verb form
help
people
become Use synonyms
an
independent Correct article usage
apply
person
. Living in other Fix the agreement mistake
people
countries
Use synonyms
people
have to do anything by themselves and learning life skills, Use synonyms
also
find personal potential. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
people
live without Use synonyms
the
parent they must be address everything Change the word
their
such
as cooking or clean-up Linking Words
room
. Correct article usage
the room
Moreover
, gaining distinct Linking Words
countries
knowledge of Use synonyms
cultural
. Replace the word
culture
People
working in other Use synonyms
countries
will meet new friends and Use synonyms
learning
Wrong verb form
learn
theirs
customs or Correct pronoun usage
their
tradition
culture.
Replace the word
traditional
However
, there Linking Words
Linking Words
also
have a Add a missing verb
are also
couple
Add the preposition
ofcouple
reason
for disadvantages. working in other cities long time influence Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
people
Use synonyms
miss
family and friends. Some Fix the infinitive
to miss
people
work in abroad city few months or years and never go back hometown, Use synonyms
although
the network technology very common, but they can not seem each other in face to face, Linking Words
thus
that perhaps effect Linking Words
people
feel lonely and got Use synonyms
problem
of psychological. Add an article
the problem
a problem
In addition
, the family’s relationship Linking Words
become
worse. Change the verb form
becomes
for example
, Linking Words
people
stay in other nation for work and have no chance to go back their country, so they may missing numerous family’s meeting or friends’ date, Use synonyms
hence
they can not keep in touch Linking Words
to
each other like before and they lost some relationship.
In conclusion, Change preposition
with
although
the disadvantage brought the issues Linking Words
but
the advantages are countless value for our life that Remove the conjunction
apply
are
create life skills and discover personal potential.Change the verb form
is