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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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There is no doubt that we should bring up a
child
 by providing them with an overall understanding of the principles of good and bad. It is widely believed and recognized that
punishment
 is an essential tool for raising
children
. I strongly disagree with the sanction and consider that sort of path as primitive, backward, uncivilized as well, and sit with the
child
 and discusses why the mistake happened without
punishment
that is
 a wonderful solution. In
this
 case, to understand what is good and what is bad, it is necessary to look over to teaching the young kids good
behaviour
 rather than punishing bad
behaviour
. Youngsters should be given
such
 an understanding through detailed explanations based on comparisons and examples.
For Example
, it is important that a
child
 who mishandled someone should feel shame from himself. He should not repeat that
behaviour
 again. That will be our winner if we can implant
this
 experience in his personality and character.
Furthermore
, unsuitable and too much
punishment
 may cause psychological harm to
children
. I cannot agree with
this
 way of dealing with them as I believed that the conversation with them is the right way to solve the problem. A
child
 who is punished for their wrong
behaviour
 feels humiliated and sad. It may negatively affect his development in the future and his self-confidence and may feel inferior. In conclusion, I want to say that there are many ways other than
punishment
 to educate
children
 and to implant values and morals within them.
Children
 are very sensitive and beautiful beings that must be preserved and protected.
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