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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality , high school students should encouraged to question and offer criticism on their teachers. Other think this will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and your own opinion.

#people #quality #school #students #offer #criticism #teachers #loss #respect #discipline #classroom
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 to questions and offer criticism on their
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 as a significantly vital difficult situation for educational curriculum . As far as I know that , Nowadays
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 are becoming
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 - educated than some of the
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this
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had been feeling dissatisfied with
teachers
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 and
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expertise when they teach
students
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 the main purpose
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 the educators by their
students
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Because
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 and of
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 modify the traditional approaches
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 so it is unproductive for
students
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 into modern approaches as it were when
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 it is more effective and successful for both of them. Turning to the other side of the argument to give self -sufficient for
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 it comes terrible contributes for their behaviour
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for instance
 the importance of these conditions
students
 should not be underestimated in response ti
teachers
 even they intentionally revenge for their bad marks ,
furthermore
such
 kind of complaints affect to reduce their salary and to decline
teachers
 reputation in their job.
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 scholars have shown
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total disrespect for them. In my
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to show their interests and abilities, certainly not to criticize
teachers
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However
 simultaneously
teachers
 have to improve knowledge and modify their practical expertise
thus
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