Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality , high school students should encouraged to question and offer criticism on their teachers. Other think this will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and your own opinion.

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to questions and offer criticism on their

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as a significantly vital difficult situation for educational curriculum . As far as I know that , Nowadays

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are becoming

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- educated than some of the

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this

case the

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learners

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had been feeling dissatisfied with

teachers

technique

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and

strategy

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expertise when they teach

students

in recent years .

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the main purpose

criticize

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the educators by their

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must be

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and of

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modify the traditional approaches

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which dominated teacher at the

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so it is unproductive for

students

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why they must sort out the

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into modern approaches as it were when

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would be dominated at the

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it is more effective and successful for both of them. Turning to the other side of the argument to give self -sufficient for

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it comes terrible contributes for their behaviour

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for instance

the importance of these conditions

students

should not be underestimated in response ti

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even they intentionally revenge for their bad marks ,

furthermore

such

kind of complaints affect to reduce their salary and to decline

teachers

reputation in their job.

Meanwhile

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scholars have shown

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total disrespect for them. In my

opinion

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we should take into account " golden mean " I guess we should give freedom to them

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to show their interests and abilities, certainly not to criticize

teachers

.

However

simultaneously

teachers

have to improve knowledge and modify their practical expertise

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tactics too.