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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

Your neighbour has written to you to complain about the noise from your flat. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter explain the reason for the noise offer your neighbour an apology tell them what action you will take

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Dear Mr Ahmadi I am writing with regard to answer your letter. I would like to apologize for making the noise.
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 week was my birthday and my friend came to my flat and surprised me, I completely knew that if I wanted to hold a party I had to announce my
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 time was an unpredictable ceremony that suddenly happened. I am really sorry for annoying you with the noise, I would like to make a promise that
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 event will not happen in future. I will send you flowers to express my sadness and regrets about that and appreciate your forgiveness. I will not hold
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 type of party during the weekdays and I will try to manage it to have less inconvenience for you and
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. I hope you will accept my apology. sincerely, Ostore Hassani
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coherence and cohesion
In some sentences, the word order or choice of words could be improved for clearer communication. For instance, 'with regard to answer your letter' could be revised to 'in response to your letter.' Also, 'I would like to make a promise that this event will not happen in future' could be rephrased to 'I promise that this will not happen again in the future.'
task achievement
There are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrases that slightly impact the readability of the letter. For instance, 'I completely knew' should be 'I knew very well,' and 'I had to announce my neighbors' should be 'I should have informed my neighbors.'
task achievement
The letter provides a clear explanation for the noise, an appropriate apology, and a promise to prevent future disturbances, which meets the requirements of the task well.
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The tone of the letter is polite and considerate, which is suitable for this type of correspondence.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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