Caring for children is an important thing of the society it is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take child care training courses to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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child

care

training is considered

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an important activity for a parent to develop their skill in giving the best treatment for their

children

. I personally agree with

this

statement because human's

characteristic

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, mental and physical

condition

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is formed since they were in childhood. It is very important to create a human with

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good character and healthy. In fact, childhood is the best phase to

mold

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all of those

criterias

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criteria

.

In addition

, a proper method to take

child

care

determined the success of the

child

's future.

Parents

are the closest person to a

child

that

play

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an important role in

molding

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their

child

's future.

Children

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very tricky, many adults even

does

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not know the reason

of

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kid's

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a kid's

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reaction. A wrong

respon

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response

of

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children

's brutalism may lead to a snowballed problem.

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the same time, a new

parent

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parents

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often time do not know the right ways to treat their

children

.

Thus

,

a training courses

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training courses

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may become an answer to

this

issue. The courses

that

is

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created by the expert

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on

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children

's

behavior

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may help

parents

to understand more about their

children

and inform

parents

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best way to deal with their

children

.

As a result

, the conflict between

parents

and their

children

will be minimized, while the bonding will be strengthened

instead

. In conclusion, a training course on

child

care

is very important for

parents

to take. Especially to those who have no experience in parenting at all. Because

,

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the information and the method taught will help

mother

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mothers

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and

father

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fathers

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deal with their kids in a proper manner.

Therefore

, the good character, healthiness both in mental and physic of their

children

may come

as a result

of

a

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proper

care

of the

children

in the future.