Many countries today are experiencing problems associated with noise pollution (excessive noise pollution above a normal background noise). What are the causes of phenomenon and what effects does it have on the people affected?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Noise
Use synonyms
pollution
Use synonyms
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
sounds
in
Change preposition
at
show examples
the hazardous level, is being encountered by umpteen nations. In
this
Linking Words
discourse, I will shed a light on the causes of
this
Linking Words
pollution
Use synonyms
and simultaneously its consequences on human beings.
Linking Words
First
Correct article usage
The first
show examples
and the foremost, cause of
noise
Use synonyms
pollution
Use synonyms
is vehicles traffic congestion. Not just in cities but
also
Linking Words
in sub-
urbans
Correct your spelling
urban
and rural areas, the usage of vehicles
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
been increased significantly.
As a result
Linking Words
of
this
Linking Words
traffic, sounds in the hazardous level is being experienced by folk for a prolonged duration.
Secondly
Linking Words
, in
this
Linking Words
21st century,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
industralisation
Correct your spelling
industrialisation
industrialization
is on
boom
Add an article
the boom
a boom
show examples
.
Hence
Linking Words
,
noise
Use synonyms
generating
Wrong verb form
generated
show examples
from industries,
machineries
Change the wording
machinery
types of machinery
pieces of machinery
show examples
and workshops is felt
at
Change preposition
apply
show examples
even in every nook and hook of the residential areas. There are
plethora
Add an article
a plethora
show examples
of effects of
noise
Use synonyms
on society. It is not only causing
physical
Add an article
the physical
a physical
show examples
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
show examples
but
also
Linking Words
affecting human beings mentally. To exemplify, people are
suffeing
Correct your spelling
suffering
from the diseases
such
Linking Words
as deafness, tinnitus, gastritis, colitis,
insomia
Correct your spelling
insomnia
and
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
etc.
Besides
Linking Words
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
psychological problems like depression, anxiety and
hyseteria
Correct your spelling
hysteria
are common among the
massess
Correct your spelling
masses
. To recapitulate, traffic and
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
industrilisation
Correct your spelling
industrialisation
industrialization
constitues
Correct your spelling
constitutes
the principal reasons for the causes of
noise
Use synonyms
pollution
Use synonyms
. In fact, they are affecting the lives of people throughout the nations.
Submitted by abdulsattarsyed28 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: