Write a formal letter to your school director in which you suggest starting an Ancient Civilisations Club
I have been a student of your school for the past seven years and I am writing
this
letter to suggest some changes to your activity clubs. I understand that in your school there are only cycling and dancing clubs and nothing for the students who want to study more. My suggestion is to have an Ancient Civilizations Club for the children who love history.
Firstly
, extra-curricular activities would be extremely beneficial for the students. For
example
it is better for them to study something newAdd a comma
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than to stay outside or play computer games.
Another benefit is the importance of understanding ancient civilizations. I hold a certificate in history and I really think Remove the comma
apply
that is
immensely important to know about how ancient people lived.
Also
, participants of the club will not be so shy when they are accustomed to talk
with others. One year ago I was employed as an instructor in Change the verb form
talking
this
club and I believe it will matter.
I hope that I have been of some assistance to you. Please inform me if you make a decision in
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question.
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