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Some people think that to be successful in sports natural ability is the main important reason others think that hard work and practice is more important Discuss both views with opinion

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How to succeed in competitive sport is a debated issue among all the people over the world,including all age groups from children to elderly.some argue it is a natural gift and others think hard work and training bring
success
 in
sports
.The
next
 paragraphs will shade focus on both sides of the notion and I think the combination of both will make sure a successful carrier foundation in
sports
.
First
, consider god gifted talents like singing,drawing and arts where those talented personalities find
success
 in their carrier in their respective fields.Those gifted talents have a natural tendency towards
such
 activities and it goes natural for them to get hands-on skills in their related
field
 with the minimum efforts they can achieve the maximum yields.In
sports
also
 the same principle of god's gift works and some
sports
 celebrities like Hussain Bolt in running is an example of
such
, gift who got the number of gold medals in the Olympic games and continuing the
success
 story till date. But every
success
 comes from hard work and proper training if someone has some talent in a particular
field
 but do not train or practice for the same
then
 it will be of no use as, for everything you need to give some time and hard work.Either it is
sports
,arts or singing.Those successful talents keep updating themselves with the changes in the
field
 as well as keep working on the talent.The above-mentioned athlete everyday works six to eight hours running to maintain his speed and enhance for future competitions. In ,short any god gifted talent needs to be sharpened by lots of practice and training as well as remodelling by
field
 experts guidance for a highly fruitful carrier.
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