Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

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causes serious advantages which

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in

extinction

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of animal and human life. I emphatically agree with that statement because

rain

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forests

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keeps

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our atmosphere in balance but

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they are

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for

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most of the rare species on our planet. 

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forests

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are one of the greatest

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of

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oxygen for our globe. 

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, due to the industrial

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we are facing global warming issues. Among others, it's caused by

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deforestation

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.

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,

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wood is burned out in many factories to produce other resources.

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, it's

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source of heating in our households.

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leads to air pollution problem which is affecting our lungs and health in general.

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, recent studies

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shown that

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average

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lungs age of middle age man in Tokyo is

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bigger than his present age. It is commonly known that during logging of the

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forests

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veriety

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variety

of animals are losing their home.

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, many rare species have rapidly

dissapeared

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disappeared

.

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is because they can not adapt to the different, sometimes

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habitats.

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example

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animals rights defenders said that crocodiles from Amazonian

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forest

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will

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disappear

till

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the end of 2050 if we would not change

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behaviours. In Conclusion, burning natural resources

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as processed wood leads to gases disproportion in the atmosphere and it will

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a crucial consequences

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on our future life as

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human beings. More than that,

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leads to

extinction

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the extinction

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of rare animals and their natural habitats. I strongly believe that we are facing critical

circumtances

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circumstances

and we have to stop cutting the

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as soon as possible ,

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otherwise

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we will be living in a different world without unique fauna and flora.