Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that

deforestation

causes serious advantages which

results

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in the extinction of animal and human life. I emphatically agree with that statement because

rain

forests

keeps

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our atmosphere in balance but

also

they are a refuge for most of the rare species on our planet.

Rain

forests

are one of the greatest suppliers of oxygen for our globe.

However

, due to the industrial ,

revolution

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we are facing global warming issues. Among others, it's caused by

deforestation

.

Firstly

, harvesting wood is burned out in many factories to produce other resources.

Furthermore

, it's the major source of heating in our households.

This

leads to air pollution problem which is affecting our lungs and health in general.

For example

, recent studies have shown that the

avarage

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average

lungs age of middle age man in Tokyo is relatively bigger than his present age. It is commonly known that during logging of the

rain

forests

variety of animals are losing their home.

Moreover

, many rare species have rapidly disappeared.

This

is because they can not adapt to the different, sometimes unfavourable habitats. For ,example animals rights defenders said that crocodiles from Amazonian

rain

forests

will disappear by the end of 2050 if we would not change

deforestation

behaviours. In Conclusion, burning natural resources

such

as processed wood leads to gases disproportion in the atmosphere and it will have crucial consequences on our future life as human beings. More than that,

deforestation

leads to the extinction of rare animals and their natural habitats. I strongly believe that we are facing critical circumstances and we have to stop cutting the

forests

as soon as possible ,

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otherwise

we will be living in a different world without unique fauna and flora.