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in the future all cars ,buses and trucks will be driveless.The only people travalling inside these vehicles will be passengers do you think the advantages of driveless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages

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Transfer
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people
 and goods by vehicles
such
 as
cars
, buses and trucks without any drivers
in
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is
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a
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apply
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one of the most arguable
discuss
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 in modern societies. In
this
essay
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 I will illustrate that disadvantages are heavier than
advantages
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the advantages
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 of moving
cars
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car
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driverless
. On the one hand, driving is a career
which
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in which
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people
 can earn money around the world. Actually, the number of human everyday work by
cars
 as a driver. They drive
taxi
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taxis
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 and trucks for transferring
people
 and
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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 in and out of cities.
In addition
, driving is an enjoyable activity for most
people
. In fact, some
people
driving
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cars
 to feel better.
Furthermore
, psychologists recommend
drive
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 a vehicle for some stages of depression will help improve mood.
Finally
,
driverless
 vehicles could
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be have
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behave
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 bugs and mistakes in programming that lead passengers to dangerous
situation
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situations
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 and
accident
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accidents
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.
On the other hand
, driving could tend drivers to be tired
in
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on
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 long roads and it increased the accident possibility. In fact,
driverless
cars
 make an opportunity for
people
have
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 e rest on ways or do
another activities
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another activity
other activities
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such
 as reading books and watching movies. Admittedly, programming vehicles cause regular streets with high rules.
For instance
, Tesla Company which produced electrical
cars
,
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 coded their production in a maximum range of speed that
people
 allowed
drive
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drive-in
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in
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 roads and highways. In summary, as I mentioned above
driverless
cars
 could be fantastic.
However
, I
am totally disagree
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 with
this
 idea that
cars
 without drivers, because
of
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it is an enjoyable activity, earning money
resource
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resources
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, kind of hobby and therapy.
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