in the future all cars ,buses and trucks will be driveless.The only people travalling inside these vehicles will be passengers do you think the advantages of driveless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages
Transfer
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Transferring
people
and goods by vehicles such
as cars
, buses and trucks without any drivers in
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is
a
one of the most arguable Correct article usage
apply
discuss
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discussions
this
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I will illustrate that disadvantages are heavier than Add a comma
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advantages
of moving Correct article usage
the advantages
cars
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car
driverless
.
On the one hand, driving is a career which
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in which
people
can earn money around the world. Actually, the number of human everyday work by cars
as a driver. They drive taxi
and trucks for transferring Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
people
and stuffs
in and out of cities. Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
In addition
, driving is an enjoyable activity for most people
. In fact, some people
driving
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drive
cars
to feel better. Furthermore
, psychologists recommend drive
a vehicle for some stages of depression will help improve mood. Change the verb form
driving
Finally
, driverless
vehicles could Change the verb form
have
be have
bugs and mistakes in programming that lead passengers to dangerous Correct your spelling
behave
situation
and Fix the agreement mistake
situations
accident
.
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accidents
On the other hand
, driving could tend drivers to be tired in
long roads and it increased the accident possibility. In fact, Change preposition
on
driverless
cars
make an opportunity for people
have
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to have
another activities
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another activity
other activities
such
as reading books and watching movies. Admittedly, programming vehicles cause regular streets with high rules. For instance
, Tesla Company which produced electrical cars
,
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apply
people
allowed drive
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drive-in
in
roads and highways.
In summary, as I mentioned above Change preposition
on
driverless
cars
could be fantastic. However
, I am totally disagree
with Change the verb form
totally disagree
this
idea that cars
without drivers, because of
it is an enjoyable activity, earning money Change preposition
apply
resource
, kind of hobby and therapy.Fix the agreement mistake
resources
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