Some people think that advertising on TV is useless and others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays,some individuals consider that publishing is more important

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purchasing things like electronic gadgets,clothes.while

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claim that publication does not matter

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choose

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choosing

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articles.because

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they feel that

advertises

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are fake they are doing

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only for their channel rating.In my view,

announcement

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plays a crucial role in everyone's life.

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essay will discuss both points. To embark on,if we follow the

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,

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there are myriad merits.

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,we can select

item

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easily without any hesitation.

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pick

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up any module,we have to know the quality of

product

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the product

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.

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there is a chance to select

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module.these days,adolescents become

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to know about the announcement in order to they acquire

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products like mobile

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phones

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,

laptop

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.

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,many youngsters follow ratings through online before going to select module.

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,people

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attain knowledge by seeing

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as a

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result

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they

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give suggestion to others which product is best or which product is not good. On another side,without publication we can not take good things.

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,without

advertisement

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an advertisement

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we go simply to

store

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we buy whatever

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is on the desk as result we may get cheap quality products.

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,we try to see

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in our

lesiure

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time.some public feel that publicity leads to disturbance while watching interest shows.so,they do not like to see

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,some people

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change their channels when advertisement comes.

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people are encouraged to see some publicity.they think that publication

are

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not true.so,they feel that it is a waste of time. To conclude,as far as I

concerned

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,without advertisement there is no world.I think

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is the best method to choose products.so,everyone

spend

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just a few minutes

to see

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seeing

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