Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the popularity of online shopping is increasing.

People

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buy things like concert tickets, books and bags on the internet. I think the

disadvantages

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and

advantages

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are the same for online shopping. In

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essay, I will discuss both

advantages

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and

disadvantages

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. It is widely accepted that online shopping has a lot of

advantages

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. There are two main factors behind it.

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, buying things on the internet makes

people

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’s lives more convenient. Many individuals do not need to leave their house and they can find anything they want online.

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, my aunts used to buy vegetables in the market. But during the pandemic she learned how to use Taobao, which is an app similar to amazon, she started to buy most vegetables online.

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,

products

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which

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are sold online are usually cheaper than physical stores.

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, the same pair of shoes are sold both online and in physical stores. In the physical store, the lowest price of the shoes is normally around 20 to 30

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off.

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, on the online

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it is half of the price in the physical stores.

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, online shopping has

disadvantages

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. One of the

disadvantages

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is that the

quality

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of the

products

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are

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not stable. Even if some

people

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buy the same

products

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from the same online store, the

quality

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of the

products

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can be very different.

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, a kind of backpack sold online, the responses of the

products

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were different, some

people

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said the

quality

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is good, some

people

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have a different opinion. At the same time, there are differences between real items and pictures. The difference can be the

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of the product or the

quality

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is different to the advertisement. To sum up, online shopping has

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and

disadvantages

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. In my

opinion

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there are

advantages

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more than

disadvantages

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because online shopping makes

people

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's lives easier than before.