Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays buying and selling things from the internet has become a trend that everyone uses.
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it has more advantages compared to the disadvantages while ordering things from the internet is something more futuristic and makes lots of things easier. I would like to put a light on the benefits that it gives us.
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we can order food and groceries to our houses with one click.
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corona time and no one would like to get in close contact with other people and these new technologies helped our lives a lot.
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, but most importantly, the fake or wrong products, we get from online.
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weeks ago I ordered pants and sadly they sent me the wrong size that caused me some problems with my school dress code and I couldn't explain that to our boarding team
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I only order my wants from the internet
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my needs. In that
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I wouldn't have a problem with timing and I wouldn't have a problem with resending the products that I have received . To conclude
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, I must say that online shopping is very beneficial for us if we use it properly and not depending on the delivery dates.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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