You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -give details of the purchase -describe the problem -explain why you need a replacement urgently

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about a problem with my recent order from your online store on Amazon.

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week, I bought a pair of blue shoes, but today I received a pair of yellow shoes

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. I would like you to check the order again and send me the correct item as soon as possible. I have an important appointment next week, and I need the correct shoes before that. I hope you can solve

this

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issue quickly. Please reply to me soon. Thank you very much. Best regards, Tuan Tai

luutuantai12345

Jul 22, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Add a subject line to the email for clarity.

task achievement

Include order number and date of purchase for reference.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has a clear focus and complete thoughts.

task achievement

Your request for a replacement was clear and specific.

coherence and cohesion

You used a polite tone in your closing remarks.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

94 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inform you about a recent purchase I made from your company
I am disappointed with the quality/fitting of the clothing
The fabric/material used is substandard/defective
The color/design does not match the product description
The size is incorrect, and it does not fit me properly
I urgently require a replacement as I have an upcoming event/function
I would appreciate it if you could expedite the process
I expect a prompt response and resolution to this matter
I suggest a refund or replacement of the item

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