In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
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a driverless
the driverless
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in the near future. Actually, It’s not a story of the distant future. Elon musk
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, after the first
self-driving car
launched from Tesla, there was mortality
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people
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people
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Nevertheless
, I believe that driverless car
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the majority
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a person
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Furthermore
, if rescue vehicles which put into disaster scence
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car
, it could save people
without any risk. Several fire suppression vehicles can be found in Russia and it has been proven to be effective. Thus
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although
there are several concerns, bold attempts are essential for the march of human progress. I look forward to a future where self-driving cars are commercialized.Submitted by shoep11 on
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