In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

it is
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belief that every
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will be
driverless
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car
in the near future. Actually, It’s not a story of the distant future. Elon
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, entrepreneur of Tesla, announced that all of the cars launching from Tesla will be
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at the beginning of
next
year. I estimate
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a positive impact
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our society.
To begin
with, it is clearly seen that a lot of
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about
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car
does not control by
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. It is because
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machine
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has
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prone to malfunction.
For instance
, after the
first
self-driving
car
launched from Tesla, there was
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event due to an error in the system that detects the
people
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Moreover
, some
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bring
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up
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that
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unemployment of workers who have
driver
jobs
such
as taxi
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drivers
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, bus
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and so on. When
people
only become
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in all
of
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the vehicle
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vehicle
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vehicles
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,
driver
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need to exist in
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seat.
Nevertheless
, I believe that driverless
car
could be a saviour to
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the majority
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of the mobility handicapped who could not drive themselves
such
as
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a person
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who is visually impaired or the aged.
For example
, the visually impaired who participated in the self-driving cars experiment evaluate
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car
as
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excellent
chauffeur
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.
Furthermore
, if rescue vehicles which put into disaster
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become
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driverless
car
, it could save
people
without any risk. Several fire suppression vehicles can be found in Russia and it has been proven to be effective.
Thus
, we can verify that self-driving
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have
more
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positive
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rather than
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others. In conclusion,
although
there are several concerns, bold attempts are essential for the march of human progress. I look forward to a future where self-driving cars are commercialized.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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