In many countries,the amount of crime is increasing.What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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rates in many countries has grown in importance over the past few decades.There are several reasons for

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problem and various measures can be taken by governments to address

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problem. In my personal opinion, poverty and lack of education are the main factors of

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problem.Research findings confirm that

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who are deprived of their basic needs are more likely to turn to

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.At the same time,they usually drop out of school because they find it hard to pay for it.

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, they find it hard to find a proper job without a good qualification so there prone to bankruptcy and many other problems to provide for their needs in their life. In many cases,

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results in many criminal activities. I believe

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governments can improve the situation by providing a free educational system and making educational training compulsory for every single

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so as to support teenagers throughout their lives.

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,the young generation is able to accrue adequate credentials without having to worry about their expenses.

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,when they finish their study and are ready to enter a work environment,they have better options to choose from to shape their life.

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,they are less likely to commit a

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and it is simple for them to find a suitable career and be valuable to society. In conclusion, the

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rates will only be reduced if governments provide

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educational system and support to set a higher standard of living for

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who are deprived of their basic needs.