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The table describes the information about the percentage of students attending four different secondary
schools
 in different periods namely 2000. 2005 and 2009. Units are measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that
community
schools
 had the most students attend during the
last
 given period,
besides
 others were decreased from the given beginning year to end. According to the table illustrates, in 2000, voluntary-controlled
schools
 was the most students
attendance
 just above half, while specialist and
community
schools
 had the same amount of pupils
attendance
, which is 12 per cent. Grammar
schools
 had only 24 per cent
attendance
. In terms of 2005, voluntary-controlled
schools
 were accounted for the highest pupils
attendance
 just below two fifths, while
community
schools
 had 32 per cent. In 2009,
community
schools
 exceeded specialist
schools
, which is 58 and 10% respectively.
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