In developing countries, rural children have less access to education.some people say that this problem is solved by providing teachers and schools. Other think that computer and internet should be provided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days because of focusing only on learning at schools and spending too much time on electronic devices so . other people argue that

parents

have to

responsible

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for encouraging their

children

to take regular

exercise

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while

believed that the majority accountability for promotion

children

to do so should lie whit schools.I will discuss both perspectives and give my own idea

To begin

with , it is generally believed that

parents

have more opportunities to share time whit their

children

and teach their good habits . In many

cases

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parents

consider a roll module for their

children

if the

parents

do what and

also

the

child

will

also

repeat Or perform.

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parents

have many tools to motivate and encourage their

children

then

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the

school

.

For example

at home father can tell his

child

if the

child

will do physical exercises or participate variety

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related to the sport the father will buy a phone or bicycle and others. if the

child

does not with these requirements

parents

may be punished and may even use force and

school

has no right to beat

children

and there is no or it can

be say

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that less opportunity to

promotion

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children

.

In

addition

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every pair of

parents

usually have one or two

children

which means they can give enough care and attention to their

children

's health while it is impossible at a

school

with thousands of students.

On the other

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not all

parents

are available to spend too much time with their

children

and have enough knowledge and

exercise

for

kinds

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kids

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. To cite another example if the

children

want to play football and he does not know the technique

as

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how to play and she is

that is

not an expert but the physical education teachers who teach at

school

know home teaches the

children

to play or do exercises correctly. There

is

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no conditions for the

children

to do some exercises at home and the

school

has

gym

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and tools.

Furthermore

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children

usually find it easier to keep

disciplines

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at

school

and sometimes are enthusiastic to take

exercise

with their friends. To sum up I firmly believe that

this

is both schools' and

parents

' responsibility to encourage

children

to take

exercise

regularly because it can give them more motivation and conditions to keep healthy