The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
people
call for the
government
to a universal basic
income
for all
citizens
while the
government
has legitimate fear about
to begin
it. In my opinion,
this
decision is revolutionary, and it might improve the human condition. The
government
has always had a lot of
income
and often had uneconomical projects ; today, machines take many jobs;
this
means the
government
gains more
income
because, in general, humans are more expensive than machines as workers.
Therefore
, the
government
can make a new law to give
citizens
universal basic
income
.
This
decision may result in less concern and fear for
citizens
, especially for unemployment.
In addition
, it is possible that
people
have more hobbies and less think about a daily basis. Society changes in many aspects;
for example
, individuals would be more creative in their life.
Furthermore
, some
people
tend to establish a new business and new
income
helps them do it.
People
likely misuse their
income
;
for example
, students tend to drop out of college or university to use
this
money, or employees resign from their work. Apart from
this
aspect, because the
government
will have a tight budget by giving
citizens
money , they may cancel the projects which benefits
citizens
. It is possible that because
people
have more
income
, the labour force is more expensive than before. The
government
faces new difficulties in resolving the lack of inexpensive workers; it may
also
lead to inflation in society. In conclusion, with considerable risk or fear for the
government
, giving basic money to
citizens
leads to increasing welfare, and I agree with that. Coherence:6
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • basic income
  • financial security
  • unemployed
  • poverty
  • support
  • discourage
  • economic growth
  • taxes
  • budgetary strain
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