You work for a company and have recently decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter explain why you are writing explain why you have decided to leave the company When you are going to leave

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am an employee at your company currently serving as a Junior Sales Manager in

Sales

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the Sales

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Department. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am resigning from my current post. I have been going through a few personal issues. My mother suffered a Heart Attack six months ago and she is still in

recovery

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the recovery

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phase because of it she is not able to look after herself.

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, I am her only son and there is no one

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me to take care of her.

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due to

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her present state of

health

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health,

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I am unable to concentrate on my job as well, which is not good for

company's

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the company's

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operations. Adding more to it,

currently

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currently,

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I am under immense pressure not only at personal but

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at professional level. In order to, find a suitable replacement at my place I am giving you a two months short notice. Most likely I will leave my job in July. I hope you will understand my situation and allow me to do the same. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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task achievement

Make sure to mention specific dates for leaving to give more clarity.

coherence couhesion

Ensure that the letter is uniformly concise and avoid repetitive details.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for this context.

logical structure

Logical structure is maintained with clear divisions between reasons for writing, reasons for leaving, and notice period.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph focuses on a specific part of the request, maintaining clarity and coherence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

194 words

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