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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Introduction
One of the arguable topics about learning a foreign is about
children
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age
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. Some experts address to cognitive capacity of
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 to learn faster another
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; apart from
advantages
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, there are noticeable disadvantages;
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, in my opinion, the best time for learning a foreign
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 is at an early
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.
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The
advantages
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 of learning a
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 for
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 might be obvious, but I want to mention some of them. The
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 one is cognitive capacity; many linguistic theorists like Noam Chomsky believe that
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 in
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 2 to 9 are more receptive learners than adults. The
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 advantage is
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 who learn a foreign
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 in primary
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 have better social-emotional skills and more confidence than other
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 who don’t know other languages. One significant reason is that monolingual
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 have more knowledge about different cultures;
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,
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 skill makes better opportunities for
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 who study in foreign countries. The
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 advantage is learning a
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 in primary
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 makes
children
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 speak like natives.
Body paragraph 2
There are some
skeptical
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sceptics
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 about the
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 mentioned above.
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, some people believe that learning another
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 at primary
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 may confuse
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, especially between mother tongue and foreign
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;
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, it is possible that they might not truly understand foreign
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 structure, which makes them confused and frustrated. Another drawback is teachers who teach a foreign
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; if the teachers aren’t qualified, it may lead
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 to be hopeless about learning a new
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Conclusion
In conclusion, the
advantages
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 of learning a new
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 at an early
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 outweigh the disadvantages, and I believe that
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 should learn a foreign
language
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 in primary
school
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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