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The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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Nowadays, English has become the most spoken
language
 around the world, in part due to the development of
tourism
. Some people believe that in the future, English will be the only
language
 spoken. I think
this
 will have more advantages over disadvantages as I will explain below.
Tourism
 has led to English becoming the most prevalent
language
 in the world, due to the necessity of finding a dialect that everyone can speak and understand.
Evident
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 benefit of
this
 is that it will cooperate with the eradication of communication barriers. A good illustration of
that is
 that people from very distant locations, from Asia to America, will understand each other and exchange information and knowledge.
Furthermore
,
this
 will provide superior educational and personal opportunities. Under these circumstances we will have children in Africa studying with the same linguistic resources as kids in England, providing them better academic and cultural opportunities.
On the other hand
, the are some disadvantages to having limited linguistic resources.
Firstly
, there are still too many urgencies in developing nations, where money must be invested in other priorities rather than
tourism
. I am certain that establishing
tourism
 as the main economic activity will lead to neglecting other areas.
Additionally
, establishing only one
language
 will make people forget their culture as years go by. Taking everything into consideration,
although
 there are certain disadvantages, I think that the advantages outweigh those. Learning a new
language
 will provide every person in the world with better communication skills and more advanced academic and cultural knowledge, despite the logistic and economic difficulties of teaching and the possibility of losing cultural dialects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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