Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own option.

It is believed by some that

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the extinction

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of specific plants and animal

species

is a major problem of

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today. Others,

however

, argue that other environmental issues are more significant. In my opinion,

although

preservation of living

species

is crucial as

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the loss

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of one

species

can alter the balance of the whole

ecosystem

, global warming and

pollution

are equally worthy to consider.

Therefore

, all environmental problems are vital; so, they should be dealt with to make sure

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longer survival of all living things on the Earth. The loss of a

particular

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endangered

species

is important because every

species

has its significance in the

ecosystem

. If one

species

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extinct, it would disturb the whole food chain.

Consequently

, there could be serious disruptions in the

ecosystem

as

species

are dependent on each other.

This

will eventually

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dangerous ramifications on humanity because human beings take their nutrition from animals and plants. Depletion of food resources could cause starvation and malnutrition which may lead to

annihilation

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the annihilation

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mankind.

Hence

,

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the preservation

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of all

species

is necessary. There are many other environmental problems

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, all of them are important,

for example

, global warming and

pollution

. Increasing global temperatures

,

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leads to climate changes which

results

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in melting glaciers, heat waves in winters and cold spells in summers.

Pollution

of all types, whether it is air, water or land, is a concerning issue of

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the contemporary

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era. Carbon emissions from automobiles and power plants by the combustion of fossil fuel have adverse effects on the lives of all living beings. It results in depletion of

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the ozone

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layer which is a protective layer that shields the Earth from the harmful

radiations

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radiation

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of

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the sun

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.

Moreover

,

pollution

is adversely affecting

health

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the health

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of all living

species

.

Thus

, global warming and

pollution

should be dealt

for

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the survival of all living things. In conclusion, conservation of flora and fauna

species

is necessary to ensure a balance in

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

an ecosystem

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.

Similarly

, other environmental problems

such

as global warming and

pollution

are equally imperative. I,

therefore

, believe that it is indispensable to deal with all environmental issues simultaneously to improve

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the lifespan

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of all the

species

on our planet.