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Some people think that parents should give their children complete freedom. Others feel that parents should limit their children’s freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #parents #children #freedom #limit #children’s
Some people believe that the
parents
 need to give a right of freedom
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younger
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 generation,I agree.
However
,others opine that
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parents
 need to limit their time. In the essay,I will outline both sides and give
necessary
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 opinion.
One
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 the one hand,caregivers need to give a
choices
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 of choosing right alternative because
this
 can enhance a child to build
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confidence in whatever job they are doing.
For instance
,
toddler
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a toddler
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 needs
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child initiated
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 learning in building blocks, with
a
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 teachers attention in the classroom.
This
 develops
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 attitude in completing the given task.
Secondly
,caregivers need to give their folks freedom of speech. To illustrate
this
, speaking up for themselves develops
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 of the child.
Moreover
,elders need to trust their young ones because it can result
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the
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 good bonding between the
parents
 and
children
.
Lastly
,some
parents
 use abusive language towards their
children
.
This
 will impact
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their
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 behaviour of younger ones because they can easily grasp and utter words or sentences from their elders.
Furthermore
,
children
 role model from their
parents
 and use inappropriate language with others.
On the other hand
,others say that they need to limit the
teenagers
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 liberty,
otherwise
children
are tend
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 to
depressed
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 and are having some behavioural issues.
This
 will impact
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children
 brain development because of
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 sensitive nature.
Moreover
,when caregivers are punishing or giving time-outs for their
children
.
This
 can tend to
more
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 aggressive nature,
Such
 as traumas,sleep disorders or sometimes complaints of missing a person. In conclusion,
although
 freedom is right for the younger generation. I believe that the
parents
 need to understand and take care of their little
children
 and respect their decision making.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freedom
  • independence
  • creativity
  • adulthood
  • risks
  • guidance
  • self-discipline
  • responsibility
  • restriction
  • development
  • decision-making
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