Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
In recent years, some people believe that
zoos
are all unkind and should go out of business. However
, others think that zoos
are helpful in protecting animals
from the forests. From my perspective, I believe that zoos
can prevent animals
from the varieties
of harm in these areas.
It is generally accepted that Fix the agreement mistake
variety
zoos
are practice the animals
, such
as monkey
and elephants to entertain people. Fix the agreement mistake
monkeys
On the contrary
, there are some disabled and weakness
Replace the word
weak
animals
that should be take
care Change the verb form
be taken
be taking
because
they can not help themself. To illustrate, if Change preposition
of because
animals
are sick in the wild, they could not recovered
from Change the verb form
recover
be recovered
disease
. Add an article
the disease
In addition
, there are veterinary for keeping them from sickness and danger. For example
, veterinary
can help disabled Replace the word
veterinarian
animals
from beasts in the forest.
For many
people around the world are Change preposition
Many
think
that Change the form of the verb
thinking
zoos
are not suitable to imprison animals
because they want to live in the natural environment and some zoos
are do
not have any Change the verb form
do
veterinaries
. Replace the word
veterinarians
On the other hand
, nowadays, a lot of animals
will be extinct, so the animals
have to adopted
by the Add a missing verb
be adopted
zoos
to breed. For instance
, extinct animals
should breed because it will be a lot of profits to keep researching in the future. Furthermore
, there are advantages for children in the next
generation to do research about animals
.
In conclusion, some individuals are disagree
with keeping Change the verb form
disagree
animals
in the
Correct article usage
apply
zoos
because it
brutal to Add a verb
isit
wasit
animals
. From my point of view, I agree with doing the
Change to a genitive case
the zoo's business
zoos
business because there are many advantages to study
and Wrong verb form
studying
develop
the world.Wrong verb form
developing
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