Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In recent years, some people believe that

zoos

are all unkind and should go out of business.

However

, others think that

zoos

are helpful in protecting

animals

from the forests. From my perspective, I believe that

zoos

can prevent

animals

from the

varieties

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of harm in these areas. It is generally accepted that

zoos

are practice the

animals

,

such

as

monkey

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monkeys

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and elephants to entertain people.

On the contrary

, there are some disabled and

weakness

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animals

that should

be take

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care

because

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they can not help themself. To illustrate, if

animals

are sick in the wild, they could not

recovered

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from

disease

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.

In addition

, there are veterinary for keeping them from sickness and danger.

For example

,

veterinary

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can help disabled

animals

from beasts in the forest.

For many

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people around the world are

think

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that

zoos

are not suitable to imprison

animals

because they want to live in the natural environment and some

zoos

are do

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not have any

veterinaries

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veterinarians

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.

On the other hand

, nowadays, a lot of

animals

will be extinct, so the

animals

have to

adopted

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by the

zoos

to breed.

For instance

, extinct

animals

should breed because it will be a lot of profits to keep researching in the future.

Furthermore

, there are advantages for children in the

next

generation to do research about

animals

. In conclusion, some individuals

are disagree

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with keeping

animals

in

the

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zoos

because

it

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brutal to

animals

. From my point of view, I agree with doing

the

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zoos

business because there are many advantages to

study

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and

develop

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the world.