Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
over the
last
two or three decades, pollutions
have been increasing tremendously Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
than
ever before Correct quantifier usage
more than
due to
human activities as well as
natural calamidy
. Correct your spelling
calamity
However
, some think that aircraft way of travel should be banned due to
heavy pollution and this
use enormous world's fuel resources. I strongly disagree with this
statement and this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, air
travel should not be prohibited because this
is a best
and Correct word choice
better
quick
mode of Correct word choice
quicker
transportation
than other modes. To be more precise, humankind can travel from one nation to another nation with in
a minimum period of time even continent to continent. Correct your spelling
within
For example
, in the previous year, Change preposition
during
in
the pandemic situation, all countries Change preposition
during
Verb problem
apply
have
stopped Unnecessary verb
apply
Change preposition
apply
to
their aircraft Change preposition
apply
transportation
, even though, Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
pollutions
Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
do
not Verb problem
has
diminish
and still now Wrong verb form
diminished
Correct article usage
the air
air
pollution rate Correct article usage
the air
increases
day to day. Wrong verb form
increased
In addition
, if air
transportation
stops, our world cannot
be without Verb problem
will not
polluted
because already pollution rate Replace the word
pollution
is
increased. Verb problem
has
Therefore
, I strongly
against Add a missing verb
am strongly
with
Change preposition
apply
this
statement.
Furthermore
, petrolium
products Correct your spelling
petroleum
not
only Add a missing verb
are not
use
for operating Wrong verb form
used
airplane
but Fix the agreement mistake
airplanes
also
many mode
of Change to a plural noun
modes
transportation
utilize enormously, therefore
, if this
kid
of Correct your spelling
kind
transportation
stops, fuel
amount will not saved because some other sectors should be needed for Correct article usage
the fuel
this
such
as factories, electricity and road transportation
vechiles
. Correct your spelling
vehicles
For instance
, a recent report by the Times oF
India said that more than 40% of the petrolium Correct your spelling
of
products
usage increased gradually in the pandemic situation Change the noun form
product
to
across the world, but Change preposition
apply
while
Correct word choice
apply
air
transportation
never operate
. Wrong verb form
operated
Therefore
, air way
of Correct your spelling
airway
transportation
should not be banned and this
is not a main culprit for polluting the global.
To conclude
, aircraft mode of transportation
is the only fasted method of transportation
. This
kind of transportation
is not only the main reason for pollutions
and uses innumerable fuel too, Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
therefore
, I strongly disagree with this
statement in the above-mentioned details and this
should not prohibit. I hope this
process is conducive to building a healthy society.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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