Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
over the
last
two or three decades, Linking Words
pollutions
have been increasing tremendously Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
than
ever before Correct quantifier usage
more than
due to
human activities Linking Words
as well as
natural Linking Words
calamidy
. Correct your spelling
calamity
However
, some think that aircraft way of travel should be banned Linking Words
due to
heavy pollution and Linking Words
this
use enormous world's fuel resources. I strongly disagree with Linking Words
this
statement and Linking Words
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, Linking Words
air
travel should not be prohibited because Use synonyms
this
is a Linking Words
best
and Correct word choice
better
quick
mode of Correct word choice
quicker
transportation
than other modes. To be more precise, humankind can travel from one nation to another nation Use synonyms
with in
a minimum period of time even continent to continent. Correct your spelling
within
For example
, in the previous year, Linking Words
Change preposition
during
in
the pandemic situation, all countries Change preposition
during
Verb problem
apply
have
stopped Unnecessary verb
apply
Change preposition
apply
to
their aircraft Change preposition
apply
transportation
, even though, Use synonyms
Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
pollutions
Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
do
not Verb problem
has
diminish
and still now Wrong verb form
diminished
Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the air
air
pollution rate Correct article usage
the air
increases
day to day. Wrong verb form
increased
In addition
, if Linking Words
air
Use synonyms
transportation
stops, our world Use synonyms
cannot
be without Verb problem
will not
polluted
because already pollution rate Replace the word
pollution
is
increased. Verb problem
has
Therefore
, I Linking Words
strongly
against Add a missing verb
am strongly
with
Change preposition
apply
this
statement.
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Furthermore
, Linking Words
petrolium
products Correct your spelling
petroleum
not
only Add a missing verb
are not
use
for operating Wrong verb form
used
airplane
but Fix the agreement mistake
airplanes
also
many Linking Words
mode
of Change to a plural noun
modes
transportation
utilize enormously, Use synonyms
therefore
, if Linking Words
this
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kid
of Correct your spelling
kind
transportation
stops, Use synonyms
fuel
amount will not saved because some other sectors should be needed for Correct article usage
the fuel
this
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such
as factories, electricity and road Linking Words
transportation
Use synonyms
vechiles
. Correct your spelling
vehicles
For instance
, a recent report by the Times Linking Words
oF
India said that more than 40% of the petrolium Correct your spelling
of
products
usage increased gradually in the pandemic situation Change the noun form
product
to
across the world, but Change preposition
apply
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while
Correct word choice
apply
air
Use synonyms
transportation
never Use synonyms
operate
. Wrong verb form
operated
Therefore
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
air way
of Correct your spelling
airway
transportation
should not be banned and Use synonyms
this
is not a main culprit for polluting the global.
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To conclude
, aircraft mode of Linking Words
transportation
is the only fasted method of Use synonyms
transportation
. Use synonyms
This
kind of Linking Words
transportation
is not only the main reason for Use synonyms
pollutions
and uses innumerable fuel too, Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
therefore
, I strongly disagree with Linking Words
this
statement in the above-mentioned details and Linking Words
this
should not prohibit. I hope Linking Words
this
process is conducive to building a healthy society.Linking Words
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