Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

over the
last
two or three decades,
pollutions
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have been increasing tremendously
than
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more than
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ever before
due to
human activities
as well as
natural
calamidy
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calamity
.
However
, some think that aircraft way of travel should be banned
due to
heavy pollution and
this
use enormous world's fuel resources. I strongly disagree with
this
statement and
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,
air
travel should not be prohibited because
this
is a
best
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and
quick
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mode of
transportation
than other modes. To be more precise, humankind can travel from one nation to another nation
with in
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a minimum period of time even continent to continent.
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, in the previous year,
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during
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in
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the pandemic situation, all countries
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have
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stopped
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to
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their aircraft
transportation
, even though,
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pollution
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pollutions
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pollution
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do
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has
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not
diminish
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and still now
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the air
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air
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pollution rate
increases
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increased
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day to day.
In addition
, if
air
transportation
stops, our world
cannot
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be without
polluted
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pollution
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because already pollution rate
is
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has
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increased.
Therefore
, I
strongly
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against
with
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this
statement.
Furthermore
,
petrolium
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petroleum
products
not
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are not
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only
use
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used
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for operating
airplane
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airplanes
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but
also
many
mode
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modes
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of
transportation
utilize enormously,
therefore
, if
this
kid
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kind
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of
transportation
stops,
fuel
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the fuel
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amount will not saved because some other sectors should be needed for
this
such
as factories, electricity and road
transportation
vechiles
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vehicles
.
For instance
, a recent report by the Times
oF
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of
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India said that more than 40% of the petrolium
products
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usage increased gradually in the pandemic situation
to
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across the world, but
while
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air
transportation
never
operate
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.
Therefore
,
air way
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airway
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of
transportation
should not be banned and
this
is not a main culprit for polluting the global.
To conclude
, aircraft mode of
transportation
is the only fasted method of
transportation
.
This
kind of
transportation
is not only the main reason for
pollutions
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pollution
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and uses innumerable fuel too,
therefore
, I strongly disagree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details and
this
should not prohibit. I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthy society.
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