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Band 4.5

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparising where relevant.

The given line graph describes information about the manufacturing of forest enterprise which was produced in three materials namely paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000, units are measured in
million
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. Overall, it can be seen that clearly, paper and packaging production was major higher than others in British during the given period. According to the graph illustrates, in paper and packaging in the initial period of production of forest industry had the highest, with an around 225
million
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, after that, the
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 decade, there was a gradual increase from 225 to 250. From 1990 to 2000,
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 figure was raised significantly, which is 250 to 350 and
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 was the peaked position of
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 manufacturing process. In terms of sawn-wood in 1980, the figure for accounted for 200
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, after the following decade, there was a significant fall, with an almost 150
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, in 2000,
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 was reached 125
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, in wood pulp in 1980, production of forest enterprise had only 175
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, after ten years, there was a slight decrease, with an average 150
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, in the final period, sawn-wood manufacturing reduced gradually, with an average 125
million
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