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Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie chart describes information about the comparisons of the different five ways of accessing the
news
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 in
two
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 different nations namely
Canada
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 and
Australia
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,units are measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that clearly, online and TV are the major highest modes of
news
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 in these
two
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 nations. According to the graph illustrates, in
Canada
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, TV is accounted for the mode of
news
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 access, with an average of
two
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 fifths while
Australia
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 just below
two
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 fifths. Online is the
second
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-largest mode of
news
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 in
Canada
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 just 36 per cent, but
Australia
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 is the most
this
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 way, with an average of more than half per cent. In the print of
news
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 is just 7% in
Canada
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 while in
Australia
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 is the double the amount of
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, with an average of 14%. In terms of radio and not the specified way of
news
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 accessing in
Canada
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 and
Australia
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, these figure accounts for less than one fifth, with an average of 7 and 3% and 2%.
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