Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success, Others believe that there are other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The opinion is divided as to whether finance alone creates happiness.
Although
some people hold the view, I believe Linking Words
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This
essay will discuss how financial stability and other factors promote happy living followed by a reasoned conclusion Linking Words
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There is no denying the influence of economic success on happiness as it makes desires and dreams to be fulfilled. Linking Words
As a result
, one can be able to address basic necessities and care for friends and relatives needing help. Linking Words
For example
, recent investigations have shown that the most frequent cause of quarrels among couples is the financial burden Linking Words
in
settling bills, sometimes leading to separation and divorce. Change preposition
of
Hence
if we are able to achieve the luxury we dream of, we are unlikely to have an unhappy state.
Even though money gives comfort as described above, Linking Words
however
, other things lift the spirits too. Linking Words
Firstly
, major milestones in life stimulate a joyful atmosphere. Linking Words
For instance
, securing a lucrative job, graduating from school, passing an exam and getting married are all events of joy money cannot buy. Linking Words
Thus
making progress in life is more than bank account digits.
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Similarly
, good health is another factor that gladdens the soul. Linking Words
Accordingly
, sick people are bittered one way or the other only wishing they could be healed. To illustrate Linking Words
further
, statistics have shown that, for every household member admitted to the hospital, there is a sense of worry and sadness among relatives. Linking Words
Therefore
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living
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they live
a
miserable state until full recovery even with the wealth at their disposal.
In conclusion, in as much as money can make a happy home, I believe successful milestones and a state of wellness can Change preposition
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