Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The supplied table highlights the information with regard to the number of the average
distance
by various vehicles in units of miles
travelled per person in the years of 1985 and 2000.
Over the conducted research, we can observe that cars are the most common transport among British
citizens. A more detailed look at the table affords to infer that the average distance
by the car is constituted of 3199 and 4806 miles
in 1985 and 2000 respectively. The second
most vehicle in the United Kingdom is buses and an ordinary British
person committed 429 miles
in the year 1985 by such
public transport. However
, the figures on this
type of vehicle have incurred changes throughout the period of 15 years and the average distance
by buses has been dwindling substantially by 274 miles
. At the same time, the local distance
bus has embarked to be common among the British
population since 1985 and the total distance
by this
vehicle has been increasing from 54 to 124 miles
. Also
noteworthy is that the figures for taxis have increased 3 times during the research period. Nevertheless
, the bicycle distance
has been declining inconsiderable from 51 to 41 miles
and it can be concluded that the vast majority of British
society prefers public transport, rather than bicycles.
To summarise, it can appear from the table that average miles
have been rising during the 15 years and we can notice a growth of figures from 4740 to 6475 miles
overall.Submitted by sunsistem123 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite