News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in a newspaper. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
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news
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factors
? are people
tend to know more negative news
and read them? what about positive news
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many factors
can be effected to editors
' decisions such
as cost
of money per Correct article usage
the cost
news
. The main reason given to support this
claim is that people
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a bad
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the news
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new
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news
first
page of newspapers or social media. Change the article
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In addition
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news
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factors
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Moreover
, in this
current time, people
always spend most of their time reading or watching bad news
that they used to see them. Although
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a dangerous
people
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curiosity
people
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, news
editors
should focus on positive news
as well. They should balance between good and bad news
in order to lead people
to feel that the world is still safe, and there are useful and helpful people
.
In conclusion, news
editors
should be more aware by
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factors
that may influence their decision. Also
, they have to achieve a balance among each type of news
to attract more people
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