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Some people think that the best way to succeed in life is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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Before a few generations ago there is a belief that to become successful in
life
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, it is necessary to have tertiary
education
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.
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, nowadays people have comprehended that having a degree is not an essential thing to be successful in
life
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. In my today's
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. Before the novice technology
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 most parents are keen on earning a
university
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 degree for their children to be successful. They thought that having tertiary
education
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 is the paramount achievement of
life
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 and it will automatically direct the
next
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 generation to their goals. In fact, most of the countries provided free
university
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education
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, which tends to drive most of the parents into that idea.
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, Asian countries like Sri Lanka, India provide free tertiary
education
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 to the pupils who possess higher results in secondary
education
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 and many people believe that it is a privilege.
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, parents directed their children to get advice and take them as examples of those who were selected to the
university
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 as role models.
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, the whole globe is directed to self-employment and freelancing trend with emerging technology. Because of
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 young generation can gain knowledge any time by accessing the web. Namely, numerous resources can be found by using the internet which can do self-study in most popular areas
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 as Programming and digital marketing. By referring to these materials nowadays adolescents are becoming entrepreneurs by establishing business ventures. To elaborate, in my country there is a group of youngsters who have established a software company after their secondary
education
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, which is running successfully and serving so many business ventures by their products. To sum up, getting a
university
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 degree is not an overwhelming achievement to become successful in
life
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.
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,
university
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life
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 gives everyone unforgettable experiences in
life
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, which can not be achieved from anywhere.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university degree
  • specialized knowledge
  • critical thinking skills
  • networking opportunities
  • vocational training
  • self-made entrepreneurs
  • gig economy
  • online courses
  • certifications
  • formal education
  • practical experience
  • lifelong learning
  • career goals
  • individual circumstances
  • academic qualifications
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