ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. It is ten years since you left college. You'd like to organise an event to celebrate this anniversary with all your friends and classmates from college. Write a letter to one of your college friends. In your letter • say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise • explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way • describe what help you need to organise this event You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....................................,

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Dear Archie, I hope you're doing well. I can't believe it has been 10 years since we left
college
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! I'm planning to organise a
reunion
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party
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on 15th August with our old classmates and friends, and I would love you to join us and relive some of our favourite
college
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memories. I'm thinking of
organizing
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a
reunion
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party
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at our
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campus cafe, as we made so many wonderful memories there. We could spend some time playing board games and catching up before going to a nearby restaurant for lunch. I
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have plenty of old photographs from our freshers'
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, convocation ceremony and farewell
party
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. I though we we could use them to create a short video and play it during the
reunion
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. I think
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would be a wonderful way to remember our
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days and reconnect with friends we haven't seen for years. I could use your help with the invitations. I lost several classmates' contact details when I changed my phone, so I would really appreciate it if you could contact them and share the details of the
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. I'm sure we will have an amazing time together. Hope to see you there! Best
wises
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wishes
, Taylor

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task response
You answer all three parts well. Add one clear line about why 15th August is the best day, or ask Archie if that day is good for him.
coherence and cohesion
Your ideas are in a clear order. Use a few more link words, such as “also”, “then”, and “because”, to make the flow even smoother.
coherence and cohesion
Check small word errors: write “I thought we could...” and “Best wishes,”.
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You clearly say what event you want, why it will be good, and what help you need.
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The tone is warm and right for a letter to a close college friend.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear start, middle, and end. Each part has one main idea.
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The use of photos, games, and lunch makes the plan easy to understand.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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