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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #person’s #culture #character #choice #clothes
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It is said that telling a lot about someone’s culture and character from his
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 of
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 could be possible. From my perspective, I agree with
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 as to why I agree with it. Just as an old saying in China goes, ‘Appearance comes from someone’s heart’. It is the same as the
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 of
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Choice
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 of
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 contains the
colours
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, styles and so on.
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,
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 can reflect one’s favour and character directly in some ways.
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, a person who prefers dark
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 like black may probably be a cool guy while a person who prefers light
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 like yellow could be energetic. Compared with
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,
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’ styles symbolize someone’s culture. There comes a vivid example. In western countries like America, people pretend to choose casual
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 which represent freedom, and shorts and skirts are common in these countries.
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, Eastern people are more conservative and shier to wear sexy
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 in their daily life. They prefer formal
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 which do not expose too much skin like shirts, especially for Chinese people who are affected by Confucianism. In conclusion, on one hand, the
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 can show one’s character,
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, the
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 can reveal one’s culture. But you should keep in mind that the statement is not definite or absolute, and we cannot learn about a person only by telling his
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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