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In the furture , nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is a very interesting statement. In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or
books
 because they will
able
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 to read everything they want online without paying. The future is already here. It just isn’t evenly distributed yet. I am not sure if I agree with
this
 statement, but it does make a lot of sense to me. The fact that we have the Internet and the ability to read everything online makes us lazy readers who don’t want to buy
books
 anymore.
This
 will change in time though as people start buying more physical
books
 again and reading them
instead
 of just looking at them on their e-reader or computer screen. I am not sure if I agree with
this
 statement, but it does make a lot of sense to me. The fact that we have the Internet and the ability to read everything online makes us lazy readers who don’t want to buy
books
 anymore.
This
 will change in time though as people start buying more physical
books
 again and reading them
instead
 of just looking at them on their e-reader or computer screen.
This
 is an interesting point he made here. It is true that there are some
things
 you can find online for free, but there are
also
 many other
things
 you can find online for a price like movies, music and games which are worth paying for when they come out in
physical
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 form. The same goes with
books
 as well; sometimes they come out as digital versions
first
 before being published physically later on (e-
books
). So yes, it is true that there are plenty of
things
 you can get from the Internet for free these days, but there are
also
 plenty of other
things
 you can pay money for which aren’t available anywhere else except through official channels (like Netflix) or websites/apps where someone pays a monthly fee to access them (like Spotify).
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