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The given map describes the information about the modifications which have taken location in the Sawry district in two different periods which is 1920 and 2020. Overall, it can be seen that clearly, Sawry district has been developed and improved over the one century with numerous apartment, bike
path
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paths
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,
bridge
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bridges
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and
houses
compare than during the given past period. According to the graph illustrates, in 1920, the north-east of the Sawry zone had Elmwood
river
,
similarly
in 2020
river
has not changed but a bridge was built across the
river
along with nearby
river
has a new bike path. In the east, in 1920 had four
houses
but over the century, these
houses
number was reduced and an apartment was built. In the west, Tulebug Bros Canney was destroyed and developed with
and
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office complex. In the south, three
houses
and two apartments were built by 2020 while the bottom of the south trees was cut down. In terms of the north-west in 1920 had Prestwich primary school but
this
was Swary zone bottom of the south.
Similarly
, the Lonoco petrol station was replaced by Prestwich primary school.
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