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Some people belive that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people belive that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affects them,Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
 modern-day, individual choices have been gaining day by day in the different aspects which affect their everyday
life
. Some
people
 claim that it makes their own choice matter likely which
people
 should select Easily,
however
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 Another individual believes that it is significant for learning about different factors.I will discuss both views and give my opinion at the end. To commence,there are plenty of choices surrounding
people
 which make their own wishes on everyday
life
.If students should take their own responsibilities own there on the shoulder,
therefore
,they are able to make independent.
Also
,
people
 have should solve every problem in their
life
 in different sectors which affect in daily
life
.They have tried to select their own decision,
hence
,individuals should make a better future goal in their
life
.
For instance
, in
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USA -the United States of America, not only children but
also
 adults are learning from their parents how to make independent in their own
life
 and select their own choice.
On the other hand
,there are a plethora of things that affect their daily routine
life
.Individuals are learning opportunities skills with help of peers or universities because children go to schools or friends houses that time they try to learn something new skills and increase their knowledge.
Moreover
, children should give respect to their parents and grandparents.
For example
,a survey was conducted by TOI - Times Of India,it had written in the article,many students are migrating to other countries because they should learn about opportunities and respect. On concluding note , learners are learning not only food, clothes and entertainment but
also
 they should try to learn about all things which help to make better future in their
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fosters
  • independence
  • critical thinking
  • responsibility
  • consequences
  • selfishness
  • compromising
  • societal norms
  • guided choices
  • development
  • wisdom
  • balance
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