Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion

Over the
last
two or three decades, mankind has been suffering
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issues
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than ever before, especially in
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adolescents. At present's
teens
have enormous stressful
lives
than past periods due to the competition. I strongly agree with
this
statement and
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, today's teenagers
face
numerous
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stress
in their
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because they should be competitive to others for each every situation
such
as studies and works.
In other words
,
teens
have a plethora of responsibilities to do in their
teenager
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time, they should be focused on their education,
therefore
, they would be gotten
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fair employment,
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is decided by the
teens
period.
For example
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 70% of
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adolescents suffer depression in
this
present era,
as a result
, some might be
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themselves.
Therefore
,
teens
are living their
lives
with
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than previous generations.
Furthermore
, teenagers life is more difficult because
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age only they have to do anything themselves without
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their parents while they have a multitude of stress.
For instance
, in Western nation's
teens
are faced innumerable depression
to
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their everyday life due to
they
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away from their parents when they are getting teenagers while they are always being stressful
lives
.
Hence
, they
face
deperssion
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depression
enormously than
provious
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previous
generations. To conclude,
teengers
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teenagers
face
many problems in their
lives
because they should be competitive
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others for work and study; their decision might be wrong
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many times while they
face
streesful
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stressful
lives
,
therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthy society across the world.
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