Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion
Over the
last
two or three decades, mankind has been suffering stress related
issues Add a hyphen
stress-related
tremendously
than ever before, especially in Correct quantifier usage
more tremendously
the
adolescents. At present's Correct article usage
apply
teens
have enormous stressful lives
than past periods due to the competition. I strongly agree with this
statement and this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, today's teenagers face
numerous strees
in their Correct your spelling
stress
live
because they should be competitive to others for each every situation Replace the word
life
such
as studies and works. In other words
, teens
have a plethora of responsibilities to do in their teenager
time, they should be focused on their education, Replace the word
teenage
therefore
, they would be gotten a
fair employment, Remove the article
apply
always
is decided by the Correct pronoun usage
which always
teens
period. For example
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 70% of the
adolescents suffer depression in Correct article usage
apply
this
present era, as a result
, some might be suicided
themselves. Replace the word
suicide
Therefore
, teens
are living their lives
with stress
than previous generations.
Correct quantifier usage
more stress
Furthermore
, teenagers life is more difficult because that
age only they have to do anything themselves without Change preposition
at that
considers
Wrong verb form
considering
to
their parents while they have a multitude of stress. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, in Western nation's teens
are faced innumerable depression to
their everyday life due to Change preposition
in
they
Correct pronoun usage
their
stay
away from their parents when they are getting teenagers while they are always being stressful Wrong verb form
staying
lives
. Hence
, they face
deperssion
enormously than Correct your spelling
depression
provious
generations.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
previous
teengers
Correct your spelling
teenagers
face
many problems in their lives
because they should be competitive to
others for work and study; their decision might be wrong Change preposition
with
in
many times while they Change preposition
apply
face
streesful
Correct your spelling
stressful
lives
, therefore
, I strongly agree with this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope this
process is conducive to building a healthy society across the world.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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