Most successful inventions do not rely on complicated technology. In fact, some of the world’s greatest inventions have been very simple things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often considered that the most significant inventions do not depend on technological development and they are not complicated. I do agree with
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, some of the great innovations actually required advanced technologies and were not so simple.  On the one hand, some of the most crucial inventions that we use up to
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day were made without
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instruments.
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, these things are pretty simple to use.
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, a wheel was made several thousand years ago. During those times there was neither a lot of knowledge about geometry nor complicated tools for engineering.
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, ancient people had enough talent and creativity to come up with the idea of a wheel and build it. 
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, modern inventions
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should not be devalued. Nowadays physicians can not imagine their work without advanced tools.
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, a car engine was made for the first time more than a hundred years ago. Clever people had to put a lot of effort into building it. If the knowledge and instruments had not been already acquired,
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indispensable device would not have been manufactured.
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, sometimes awareness and resources are needed to make fundamental changes in science and engineering.
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, I would like to say that though some easy-to-use things were brought to life without knowing a lot about science and having less complex tools that we own today, there were important innovations that were made with the help of developed instruments and difficult intellectual work.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • usability
  • groundbreaking
  • fundamental needs
  • transportation
  • organization
  • societal impacts
  • dissemination
  • straightforward
  • spark further innovation
  • telecommunications
  • production efficiency
  • scalable
  • widespread
  • manufacture
  • distribute
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