Some people say that it is better for children to grow up in a city, while others say that growing up in the countryside is better. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
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children
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city
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, and we will explain now.
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countryside
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children
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children
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activity
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activities
media
. In the long run, if the public services and the internet system in the Use synonyms
countryside
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